Homestuck Cosplay Critiques

I don’t have the shirt transfer yet, nor do I have a way of taking a full body shot myself so heres a seperate shot of the bottom half

I put pink laces in the shoes which are just white canvas shoes because I thought it’d be cute and match the shirt transfer when it comes, is this an okay idea?

N says: Cutie! I absolutely adore your makeup. I love everything about this so far and can’t wait to see the finished project, if you choose to show us. The only thing I’d say is that the little swirly hair bit could be MORE swirly, but other than that, you look lovely.

D says: I agree with N, your makeup is great! And I think the pink laces/white shoes is a fine idea, it’s cute when people throw a bit more colour into their outfits I think. Other than what N said about the curl in the wig, I can’t really think of anything to suggest.